Avatar Support of the pink jacket rabbit

Oh, how these thirty days have been punishing upon my legs and upon my brow. I have sought thus the goal of running a mile and a hundred in order to furnish those without with the ability to smite the evil. It has been long and I have sweated more than any man should. I have sweated more than any two men should, and showering every day has been a massive burden.

When my troubles did besmirch me, when my woes did overwhelm me, how did I manage to keep going? Those darker moments whence all the light is sucked away from the day and all you are left with is the end in the distance that leaps further and further away from your grasp. How could I keep going?

I would look to the sky, nay, to the universe above and remember that all things must pass and I, too, would soon reach the finishing line. Who was cheering me on? My girlfriend, my family, my friends, some even that were unbeknownst to me. For when browsing the shops last week did I chance upon a little beacon of hope who has been with me in spirit the entire time.

If you ever find yourself in a similar position, if you ever doubt upon your abilities or capabilities at the job within your hands, think on my friend and he will keep you on track.

6 comments on “Support of the pink jacket rabbit

  • It’s not as effective. You need to lose that word to offer the warmth of a friend cheering you on from the sideline.

    You could maybe knock it down a notch, rustle up a “you’ve” instead, that might work.

  • Does removing a word make something more effective? Can you remove any word? Maybe it should read YOU HAVE THIS. That would be one word shorter, and therefore more effective, while still being more grammatically correct than the original.

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